This week, Craig answers listener questions about rewriting on set, AI coverage, when and how to kill off characters, sizing up producers, and more.

There's also an extra-special guest appearance for this week's One Cool Thing.

In the bonus segment for premium subscribers, Craig discusses how to be wrong—something he feels he knows all too well.

Links:

• "Widow's Bay" Games: Daddy's Home & Teeth
• "L.A. Law" Elevator Scene
• Ed Wood (1994)
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Why is it so satisfying to watch a highly-skilled character complete their goals? And why can it be equally hilarious to watch an incompetent character bumble through a slew of screw-ups? In this episode, John and Craig discuss how to play with competence in your characters.

We also say goodbye to our producer Drew Marquardt with a thoroughly embarrassing exit interview, and reveal our new producer. However, it's not really goodbye, because Drew will be staying on to work with John on an upcoming project (TBA).

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig deliberate on the question: Should you quit LOUDLY?

Links:
* The attack on competence by Iris Meredith
* Scott Tenorman Must Die (South Park – Season 5, Episode 4)
* Bartosz Ciechanowski's Curves and Surfaces
* Rhubarb Breakfast Dessert by Melissa Clark
* Easiest Citrus Roasted Rhubarb by "Kate Cooks"
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John and Craig welcome writer and showrunner David E. Kelley (Big Little Lies, Ally McBeal) to look at his process for adapting books to TV, particularly with his latest series Margo's Got Money Troubles. They explore where to find your act breaks, crafting complicated tones, and when to trust the writer of the book.

We also look at how TV has changed over David's storied career, how he runs a writers room, creating story engines, the difference between writing for broadcast TV and streaming, and the one thing a TV show should never be.

In our bonus segment for premium members, David coaches John and Craig on how to survive a long running series.

Links:

• David E. Kelley on IMDb
• Margo's Got Money Troubles on AppleTV
• Harvard Alcohol Project: Designated Driver
• The Painful Truth About Long Covid by Alan Levinovitz for WIRED
• Salmon
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